clark-cry of the firebird by Mic Loves Books | Dec 28, 2019 | 1 comment 1 Comment Tania Park on January 20, 2020 at 5:01 pm Read this, enjoyed the characters, setting and storyline but I thought it could have done with a more thorough editing. Reading the word ‘that’ 1450 times was off-putting. I found a couple of timing issues which were confusing. Reply Submit a Comment Cancel replyYour email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Comment * Name Email Website Notify me of new posts by email. Δ
Tania Park on January 20, 2020 at 5:01 pm Read this, enjoyed the characters, setting and storyline but I thought it could have done with a more thorough editing. Reading the word ‘that’ 1450 times was off-putting. I found a couple of timing issues which were confusing. Reply
Read this, enjoyed the characters, setting and storyline but I thought it could have done with a more thorough editing. Reading the word ‘that’ 1450 times was off-putting. I found a couple of timing issues which were confusing.